Update: Additional ideals

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So before we begin, you can read my original pitch here.  Make sure you open in a separate window because it is pretty long and you might forget to come back here. lol  So here is an update.  I turned in Act One for my script.  Got an "A" and positive feedback but it wasn't without notes and criticisms either.  These things I have taken into account and also I have thought of additional ideals for the project.

The Invisible World: Genesis

Discover the world of Isabelle prior to and after her passing.  How did she discover her potential?  What about her family and loved ones?  How have they moved on?  How have they become involved?  How did they end up where they are now?  All these questions will be answered.

Concept

So after some feedback from classmates and fellow aspiring writers, I realized it would be a good idea to come up with something to further showcase the characters' background.  The script I'm working on now is more of a pitch movie.  Again, something I'm doing due to feedback from my professor.  I realized that to do a show, you have to get noticed.  So I got to work on writing the script for a pitch movie, sorta similar to the likes of Mortal Kombat: Rebirth among other movies and short films you'll find on youtube.  Admittedly the challenge was balancing all the characters and still making sure that Isabelle remains the hero.  Also my approach was pretty much in the middle.  By that I mean the characters had their journeys up to the point in my plot.  Understandably people will be confused and a fellow student gave me an idea to do an anthology series that gives the characters origins, how they met, and even key moments tied to the "movie."  Don't worry, I'll finish the script first and then get to work on Genesis, but thought you should know.  Overall, what I'm going for is to present a "blue print" of my vision if that makes sense.  So if I can get it down, some things won't happen the same, maybe they happen later, or maybe something else entirely happens.  Hell maybe I will keep it all intact.  I don't know.  Never done this before and this is something really ambitious on my part.  I can only hope I succeed somehow.

The Belletrist

Nathaniel Hawthorne.  Edgar Allan Poe.  Ralph Waldo Emerson.  Henry David Thoreau.  Together they form the Belletrist, the men of letters.  All men are intellectuals, yet discovered that which is invisible to the rest of the world.  Discover the secret brotherhood and the lives they lived as they make new discovers, face difficult challenges, and preserve a legacy that would remain for decades.

Concept

For this one, I decided this would definitely be a web series prequel to Hawthorne and Brown, with Nathaniel being the POV character, having left notes and letters to his family and future generations within the Custom House, his personal "Fortress of Solitude."  Daniel Hawthorne would have found and read from them.  The series will have action, but it will be mostly about exploration and discovery.  I mentioned before I had wanted to do fictional versions of real life figures and this is it.


The Invisible World: Alpha

Same world.  New time.  New Hero.  For years people believed in their existence.  Conspiracy theorists were written off as mad.  Skeptics were in mass, yet the truth remains: Lizard People are real.  They have existed before us and now are on the rise.  Most do not even realize who they are.  Perhaps they are us!  Witness the story of a young woman discovering her lineage and a whole new world hidden from our eyes.

Concept

Ok this one I've been thinking about.  I've considered adding sci-fi to the Invisible World, but considering the series is Supernatural, I don't want to alienate the concept.   I got some inspiration from Doctor Who after seeing the Silurians..  It is also based on the popular conspiracy theory about Lizard People walking among us.  This one would be both supernatural and sci-fi, providing the question if extraterrestrials exist and how.  Also reptilian figures have always played a huge role in mythology.  In Christianity, we have the serpent, in Greek, we have the Hydra, Norse, the World Serpent, and in EVERYTHING a dragon.  The reptiles are presented as these creatures that can challenge gods and are high powers within themselves.  They are in a whole other league and I think it's worth exploring.  Also this series is meant to take place after the first Invisible World, so this would take a while.  Who knows if it'll even survive.  I'm a beginning, middle, and end type.  I can look ahead to see the vision of the end. The challenge is getting there and being satisfied.

Mythology

World of Light – Heaven.  Asgard.  Olympus.  These and other pantheons create this world.  Gods, angels, beings of light inhabit this place.

World of Darkness – Home to dark creatures, vampires, werewolves, demons, and the Nightmare Man.  It is believed that before creation, there was just complete darkness.  This is where darkness reigns and some seek to set things back to how they originally were.

Dream World – Home to the things born of imagination.  The wonderful world of fantasy.  This where people go to dream, yet there are forces that live here that seek to do others harm and some who protect them.

Blue World – World of the ocean and water based beings.  Atlantis is home to this place as well as R'lyeh.

Limbo – The Invisible World and the "center of the World Tree."  It is also referred to as the "Ground Zero of Worlds" as other worlds are created through this.  Going through Limbo is also the way to travel to other worlds.  Through this world, it is also possible to create additional worlds, which means that there are other ones not known.

Earth – Physical world and home to humans, mostly made up of skeptics and those blind to that which is hidden from them.

Red World – Home to Hell, Hades, and Lake of Fire.  Demons, beings of fire, and other dark forces proclaim this as home.

Sky World – Home to the wind Element and beings of wind, including the God, North Wind.

North World – Home to the element of Ice and ice beings.  It is also home to the North Pole, where a certain jolly fat man lives.

Concept:

Again, doing something different here.  I know there are the 9 worlds in Norse Mythology and some others do have a world tree, but it is comprised of only 3 worlds.  I went the route of the former and did my own thing with it.  Something that makes sense to me and hopefully to others.  It's not final of course as I may change it, but for now, starting with 9 worlds and see what spawns.
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